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    dots Submission Name: sideshow attractiondots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 168
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 781
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 982



    Description:
       i feel like an animal in a cage as the world goes by they just point, laugh and stare
    being told its all my fault that he broke up with me because im fat, ugly etc
    so i wrote this poem because thats what happens to people at sideshows


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    dotssideshow attractiondots
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    everybody gather round
    look at this girl as she falls to the ground
    with her broken heart and broken tears
    this girl lives her life in a cage of fear
    lets point and laugh lets point and stare
    its all her fault so nobody cares
    maybe if she didnt look this way
    we wouldnt have something to laugh at today
    you think it funny as her life falls apart
    she has it masterd down to a fine art
    everytime she tries her best
    it all fucks up and she is left a mess
    look at her make-up running down her face
    she looks like a clown like a fucking disgrace
    all of this from a broken heart
    its just to easy to tear her apart
    eat your peanuts drink your coke
    laugh and point cause its all a joke
    this girl means nothing to any of you
    just something to make fun of
    because at the end of the day
    im just another
    sideshow attraction





    Submitted on 2007-07-12 08:32:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The world really sucks sometimes, doesn't it? The people saying that to you are all either insecure or are trying to cheer themselves up by making you feel bad. They aren't worth it, believe me I've had people treat me like that. *hugs her*
    | Posted on 2007-07-12 00:00:00 | by Lord Bane | [ Reply to This ]


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