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    dots Submission Name: To do...dots

    Author: Kube
    ASL Info:    24/M/Australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 64/56/32
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
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    dotsTo do...dots

    In what thought like freedom
    Really was self doubt
    Nothing but denial
    I thought I could do this
    Straight away
    Shit takes time
    Small steps brother
    Small and easy steps
    It wont work it self out
    Nothing does
    You got to do that shit for yourself
    Do it!
    For the love of your own soul do it!
    No more “what if” or “My time will come”
    Just fucking do it man!
    We make our own life
    We make our own death
    Make it right
    Get shit right
    Are you not tired?
    Do you like this?
    Get it done….

    Submitted on 2007-07-12 09:14:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well... its really powerful, I to am tired. Tired of waiting for things to be handed to me. I should just go out and do it... But that requires to much effort... I really like it... I look forward to more of your wrightings.
    | Posted on 2007-07-13 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]

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