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pick your poison


Author: explosions
ASL Info:    -237.6995/she/the library
Elite Ratio:    6.87 - 59 /50 /52
Words: 80
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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just some ideas i had jumbling around in my head.
written 1.9.07.


pick your poison



pick your poison.

the heretic takes hemlock, the cynic chooses cyanide, the artist claims arsenic.
and the lunatic leaps to love.
what a fool


and
there's a sort of backwards beauty
in sorrow and tragedy
do you know what i mean,
do you know what i mean?

time runs out
like deluded teenagers from their homes


(but it's always the home stretch that's the hardest)




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