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THIEVED from the cradle, stolen from the crib: cursory nursery your life, so tragic, a child stripped of innocence[/ignorance, it’s all the same] and, therefore, never one if i told your story [word for word] to the widow who lives across the street, sipping tea and eating marzipan, after a hot summer’s day work in the garden; she’d cry a deluge of tears salinating her confectionery maybe i’ll tell her one day when i’m bored your story, so tragic, if it ever fell upon the ears of the fisherman at the dock he’d scoff and scowl, clench his jaw, grit his teeth say who cares it’s yer own gawddamn fault but i’d know by his eyes, through a certain softening and later, out of the sympathy would come sacrifice he’d donate a few grimy, hard-earned dollars maybe i’ll tell him one day when i’m feeling charitable your story, so tragic, a thousand stories like yours would make up a skyscraper of sorrow but i wouldn’t shed a tear your life, so tragic, |
Interesting...I'm not sure what to think on it actually. It's different in a odd sort of way in both style and symbols. I don't mean that as a bad or good thing. I'm not sure what else i can give you than that. by the way, you have posted the most poems at one time that i have ever seen by one user. I don't think i've seen that many poems posted at one time by the community all at once even. | Posted on 2007-07-14 00:00:00 | by nomad knight | [ Reply to This ] | |