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    dots Submission Name: Live Each Daydots
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    Author: ravenwolf68
    ASL Info:    40/not enough/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    4.76 - 690/543/62
    Words: 272
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 217
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    dotsLive Each Daydots
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    Every day I wake up and light up
    Bracing for the media’s endless reminders
    Of quick and unexpected changes
    In the world and the lives around us

    Forgot last time we got together
    To thank you for giving me a smile
    Didn’t tell you how great you are
    How you make this life a little better

    Was unaware when you left for school
    I didn’t kiss or hug you good-bye
    Really, I wasn’t thinking it mattered
    Since you always turn red and complain

    The last time we saw each other,
    Did I tell you how much I love you?
    What a good friend you are to me?
    How beautiful you make me feel?

    No – guess I was trying to be cool…

    Woke up this morning – lit my cigarette
    Heard the tragedies of today
    Listened as the reporters interviewed
    Heartlessly persistent for thoughts and feelings
    Of ones left behind still fresh in shock

    Heard their regrets and feelings of loss…
    They didn’t know that the phone call yesterday,
    That lunch together last week
    That drink at the bar last month
    Was the last they would share with you…

    They cried and friends held them close
    They realized as the reality sank in
    There won’t be any more kisses or hugs
    It’s too late now to say how they felt
    There is no tomorrow to share feelings

    In case I don’t have a tomorrow
    Let me tell you now
    How much I love you
    What a great person you are
    And hug you like it’s the last time – every time

    ~Ravenwolf




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    ||| Comments |||
      This is really nice, Lisa. I totally agree with that last part. We never know when we will see someone we love for the last time. We should love NOW, and with all our hearts. Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2008-01-11 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Lisa, this is beautiful, and an excellent soulful reminder to us all to not take the people we love for granted! I've faced my own mortality more than once, and anyone who has will tell you after to live every day like it might be your last! This was a really beautiful philosophical write!
    | Posted on 2007-12-02 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      This comes from the heart and you show how you live life from day to day. And the last stanza

    "In case I don’t have a tomorrow
    Let me tell you now
    How much I love you
    What a great person you are
    And hug you like it’s the last time – every time"

    shows that you know that no one is promised tomorrow and how you should let people you care about how much you care about them.

    Nice Write and keep it up

    poet09

    | Posted on 2007-11-18 00:00:00 | by poet09 | [ Reply to This ]
      thats beautiful, it actually made me cry and not many things do. I love the way this poem had feeling and emotion in it, not many poems i read now a days do. its beautiful and the meaning is so strong that EVERYONE can relate to. =] great job!
    | Posted on 2007-10-31 00:00:00 | by Brat05 | [ Reply to This ]
      "In case I don’t have a tomorrow
    Let me tell you now
    How much I love you
    What a great person you are
    And hug you like it’s the last time – every time"

    If I had not read any of the rest of your wonderfully insightful poem, this stanza could have stood alone as an example of how to live life. I'm just as guilty as the next person of not always showing the depth of feeling that lies in my heart. Although age and time have altered my perception already, I shall not forget your words soon.

    Wonderful and much appreciated write!
    Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-10-31 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      I still have no idea what I can possibly say about this, but I'm going to try anyway.
    It's the only thing I've read in quite a while that made me think, "Very good point."

    "The last time we saw each other,
    Did I tell you how much I love you?
    What a good friend you are to me?
    How beautiful you make me feel?"

    Whenever someone I love dies, I ask myself those questions. The answer is usually no, but they don't have to be the last things I've said to the person. I think that as long as they already know how I feel, then what is said last doesn't really matter. ...But that might just be me.

    It's a small reminder, but a very important one, and I love everything about it.

    Again... I can say nothing negative.

    Excellent.

    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2007-10-16 00:00:00 | by Razor2TheRosary | [ Reply to This ]
      I am completely smitten with this. I don't think I realize personally how easily the ones I love can be taken away from me. Your poem was a beautiful slap in the face. Thank you for the fantastic write, I enjoyed every second of it. Your way with words is without a doubt, breathtaking.

    *favorites*

    | Posted on 2007-07-14 00:00:00 | by roses | [ Reply to This ]
      Heard their regrets and feelings of loss…
    They didn’t know that the phone call yesterday,
    That lunch together last week
    That drink at the bar last month
    Was the last they would share with you…

    They cried and friends held them close
    They realized as the reality sank in
    There won’t be any more kisses or hugs
    It’s too late now to say how they felt
    There is no tomorrow to share feelings

    In case I don’t have a tomorrow
    Let me tell you now
    How much I love you
    What a great person you are
    And hug you like it’s the last time – every time



    I suppose if I had one nit to pick it would involve the line' they realized as the reality sank in,' bascally because the use of two words so similar in the same line sounds slightly awkward (although it could just be me). The tone of the post seems to be a plea for family togetherness and healing wounds before opportunities to make peace and enjoy one another are gone. Not much of that can be done over a casket.

    Nice to see you again, btw.
    And nicely written.
    Bill.
    | Posted on 2007-07-14 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      Raven
    Absolutely Flawless
    I saw so much of myself in this write
    Trust me on this I have had this same relationship experience with many Friends in the past
    How I wish I could find these friends again and share this beautiful write with them
    I am making this a favorite
    Please keep in touch!!!
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-07-13 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Hugs back.

    Nothing one can say about such a write that comes from the heart like this.

    Nice one Mona Lisa...
    | Posted on 2007-07-13 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]



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