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    dots Submission Name: The Tormented Soul I'm Holding Withindots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/391
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsThe Tormented Soul I'm Holding Withindots
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    A secret, a secret that's how it began
    to keep it, to keep it held in your hand
    I want to let go, I want to set it free
    but what then would become of me
    It's painful and not right
    because of it I want to die
    but I didn't do it
    this secret I'm holding within...




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