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my poetry


Author: to-wit
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my poetry



if i could say once
"take the time to read my lines"
i would well to do




Submitted on 2007-07-13 16:18:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  ...It makes sense but yet again doesnt? Man I love it that way for some reason, keep riddling me! lol
~*alexis*`
| Posted on 2007-07-14 00:00:00 | by darkwiccan14 | [ Reply to This ]


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