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    Author: to-wit
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    dotsmy poetrydots
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    if i could say once
    "take the time to read my lines"
    i would well to do




    Submitted on 2007-07-13 16:18:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ...It makes sense but yet again doesnt? Man I love it that way for some reason, keep riddling me! lol
    ~*alexis*`
    | Posted on 2007-07-14 00:00:00 | by darkwiccan14 | [ Reply to This ]


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