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    dots Submission Name: a love poem, " and what i miss"dots

    Author: giovany164
    Elite Ratio:    0.96 - 1/5/10
    Words: 216
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       hahha.. i miss it bunches

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    dotsa love poem, " and what i miss"dots

    i miss being romantic

    i miss having someone on my mind

    all the time

    even when they are in my arms

    i miss knowing everything about someone

    likes and dislikes

    i miss being able to read her mind

    and her reading mine

    i miss playing with her hair

    in a movie theater


    i miss gazing into eyes

    detecting if there were lies

    and seeing a person's true desires

    hopes and dreams

    everything that makes them scream

    all sealed with a kiss

    never again do i miss

    such simple bliss

    of what we all know

    wishing for them never to go

    disire controlls us

    and we gain trust

    lose our selfs in lust

    everything that we have or had must

    still be there

    laying bare

    where we left it

    but we don't forget

    for years it stays alone

    my tears i sleep at home

    just to forgive

    and let us learn to live

    our lifes in a ways that we were in love

    as if heaven was no longer above

    but here

    where we can be near

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      how sweet and sad. I love it tho. i hope all is well.
    | Posted on 2007-07-14 00:00:00 | by darkwiccan14 | [ Reply to This ]

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