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Curse Me Dead


Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 61
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Curse Me Dead



Curse me dead,
For 1000 tears I've cried
And a million yrs Ive bled,
My heart echoes the same sad symphony thats been haunting me,
& all the heartache,
All the pain,
It’s not worth nearly
As half as much
As it’s meant to be,
Words will comfort me for a time,
But soon I’ll need someone to call mine




Submitted on 2007-07-14 05:07:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Though this write is short you were easily able to capture the emotion one feels when they are alone in the World
I Liked the way this write flows and came out
Excellent Work!!!
God Bless
Ron
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
Thank You
Ron
| Posted on 2007-07-14 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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