i keep coming back to this one, debating whether or not to comment. I don't get the whole double spacing thing, so everything felt vaguely unconnected. i loved the whole
what they think they know is right.
that is so true and it was really a cool line. i dunno. this poem didn't rock my blocks nearly as much as your other ones do. but may thats just because i have read it too much and analyzed it to death. anyhow, not too shabby. but i feel theres more here.