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    dots Submission Name: Emptinessdots
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    Author: EyesOfMight
    ASL Info:    17/F
    Elite Ratio:    3.44 - 11/14/16
    Words: 280
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 132
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1502



    Description:
       this is just how ive been feeling the past few days.... yep...


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    dotsEmptinessdots
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    Alone in my head with all the voices screaming again
    I don’t know what to do or how to act
    What is a girl suppose to do

    Love is such a four letter word that screams insanity
    Tears seem to be the only thing that comes out of it
    What am I suppose to do

    The emptiness flows deep within me
    I feel the silvery hands on my heart
    I taste the coppery blood in my mouth

    I can only hope that this is the end
    I can only think that it will finally be over
    But I carry on one more sorrowful day

    The damage is done and this time it seems irreversible
    This time my eyes stay wide and my vision blurred
    No one will come to my rescue this time

    As I lay in my bed I feel water on my face
    I touch my cheek and a tear is on my finger
    When did I begin to cry

    Numbness and loneliness are my being
    I wish you could hold me in your arms
    I want to cry out my heart to you

    The one who let me go without a care is haunting my dreams
    Please hold me tight so I can dream true
    Please let me be free in the morning

    The emptiness flows deep within me
    I feel the silvery hands on my heart
    I taste the coppery blood in my mouth

    I can only hope that this is the end
    I can only think that is will finally be over
    Yet I carry on one more sorrowful day




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