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six feet down

Author: lastdragon
ASL Info:    19/F/MO
Elite Ratio:    3.39 - 38 /43 /13
Words: 39
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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six feet down

In this precious
Xerox of some other reality

Fitful imaginings
Evaescent truths
Eyries, hanging on the edge
Teetering treacherously

Dreading the moment
One of us asks
What if six feet really is
Not so far down

Submitted on 2007-07-15 13:18:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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