Not that Girl by Randa04

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Author:	Randa04
ASL Info:	19/Female/NC
Elite Ratio:	1.65 - 21/63/76
Words:	102

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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Not that Girl dots

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If i had my choice..

You would be with me instead of her

But who am i to talk?

I could never get my way..

& I'm not the kind of girl who just goes after what she wants

If I could just be different..

For a moment or maybe 2..

I sware I'd prove I need you..

And You might need me too.

I'm sorry I'm not good enough..

I'll just be on my way..

Just promise..If we meet again..

to be the one who wants me too.

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