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    dots Submission Name: NOT DONEdots
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    Author: DontLetGo421
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 118/238/141
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsNOT DONEdots
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    running away trying my hardest not to turn
    this is my test and i've been trying to learn
    as i look on forward, the road begins to lengthen
    i become helpless walking along the road made to strengthen
    but each step brings me back where i've been
    i ponder on why you have even been sent
    you've been away so long that i'm afraid to see you now
    i would use your power but i'm afraid ive forgotten how




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