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    dots Submission Name: Dear Readerdots
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    Author: AeThe Lost Poet
    ASL Info:    19/M/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 147/184/122
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 785
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 705



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    dotsDear Readerdots
    -------------------------------------------


    I send you,
    Hugs and kisses,
    Wishes for well,
    Impelled, I’d give,
    You gifts in,
    Spills and swells,
    Compelled, by nature,
    I dwell with you,
    In thought,
    Because I sought,
    “Help”, but help,
    Wasn’t brought,
    Rather cuts so rough,
    I'm run ragged,
    So love deal it,
    That scissor words,
    Cut so much I,
    Barely even feel it,
    So i laced the box,
    With love,
    Sign it, and then seal it,
    First, love, then,
    Trust then comes,
    The Double Helix,
    Signature B, a squiggle,
    Finally to close it,
    Sincerely Me, AeThe
    Lost Poet




    Submitted on 2007-07-17 08:50:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I thought this was great! Great flow, great imagery and the way its composed was unique and added to it! One of the most unuque poems Ive read!!
    | Posted on 2007-08-13 00:00:00 | by TheStillSilence | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it but all the commas take away from it. otherwise great write
    | Posted on 2007-07-19 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      I love the way it flows... Glad you're back. good write. ^-^
    | Posted on 2007-07-17 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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