this vaguely makes me think of that band [blue october?] with their song Hate Me:
Hate me today
Hate me tomorrow
Hate me for all the things I didn't do for you
Hate me and wait, yeah wait for it to swollow
Hate me so you can finally see whats good for you
this is their refrain/chorus.
i dont know... yours sounds very the same in sentiment which makes me think perhaps you could find a way that hasnt been used to express this relatioship and its termination.
what are you going to benefit from this person hating you? i do not understand? so you feel bad for something? surely your own guilt etc would make you feel punnished enough without this person adding their condemnation?
i think you could do a whole lot more with your idea than you have.