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    dots Submission Name: An Unsung Birthday Songdots
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    Author: doppelganger
    ASL Info:    26/f/your brain
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 34/223/160
    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 1728
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1222



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       Ironic huh? How it's "unsung" yet I'm singing it?
    Makes sense though if you think about it long enough... just think.


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    dotsAn Unsung Birthday Songdots
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    You woke me from a dream
    with just a shadow
    So I rose my glass to you at midnight
    I've never been able to make those pretty crystal glass
    noises but I did tonight

    Dear nameless
    I hope you're happy
    Wherever it is that you are
    In a car with your friends getting drunk to forget
    Whoever it is that you are

    But I'm here singing this unsung birthday song
    And I wrote it for you even though it might be wrong
    Because we've never spoken but I'm sure you're wonderful

    You play beautifully
    I've heard it
    From these speakers under this lamp
    I've never had the blessing like the many in my town
    To hear your soul poured from an amp

    But I'm here singing this unsung birthday song
    And I wrote it for you even though it might be wrong
    Because we've never spoken but I'm sure you're wonderful

    So I don't know why I'm writing this
    For a boy who's never gonna hear it
    But I'm going to keep singing this
    Unsung birthday song
    Silly as it might be




    Submitted on 2007-07-18 00:13:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Because we've never spoken but I'm sure you're wonderful

    I love it!

    This is such an awesome piece of writing...what inspired it?
    | Posted on 2007-10-21 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      i liked this a lot which is unusual because im irritated and i want to say bad things to people right now.. but this was amusing especially at the beginning..
    | Posted on 2007-07-18 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]
      a good write! to fully comprehend this, the reader must read it twice or thrice! keep it up!
    | Posted on 2007-07-18 00:00:00 | by damienelizabeth | [ Reply to This ]
      I really enjoyed this poem. It made me think of the coming together of others. Like if everyone just sang an unsung birthday song to someone maybe the would be a better place. I don't think that was what you were heading for but, that's what it made me feel.

    Good Job!

    Anna
    | Posted on 2007-07-18 00:00:00 | by LadyDoragon | [ Reply to This ]
      it was good! i kinda pictured(?) the song as a fast-paced smiths tune w/ elements of the arcade fire. i liked the words. that sounds very dumb. no, seriously, "You woke me from a dream
    with just a shadow
    So I rose my glass to you at midnight
    I've never been able to make those pretty crystal glass
    noises but I did tonight"
    were really great. and you had a really different but catchy rhyme scheme. i sung it in my head as i read it. good tune!

    | Posted on 2007-07-18 00:00:00 | by freddybuzzkill | [ Reply to This ]


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