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    dots Submission Name: broken hearteddots

    Author: parafraid
    ASL Info:    47/M/SC USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.29 - 0/2/14
    Words: 242
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsbroken hearteddots

    smooth and clean
    damn this thing
    this former tree
    it puzzles me

    just to mark
    with black lines
    it is a chore
    and nothing more

    i've heard lines
    much like these
    they just won't do
    or fill my needs

    some markings?
    clever, fresh?
    the mind stays clear
    so too, this page

    it's whiteness
    shouts nothing
    about my life
    or dreams, bizarre

    my pencil's still
    the page, still white

    damn this page!
    it's so clean
    it is not fair
    that i just stare

    a clear mind
    i've got that
    my pencil's here
    the page, still clear

    come to me
    muse o' mine
    something witty
    good or shitty

    you might leave
    a mark, a line?
    something devine?

    a clear page
    can't you see?
    it's unmarked lines
    are mocking me

    i've sat here
    leaden hand
    the muse is gone
    the page, bright white

    i'm sleepy
    and staring
    the lines stare back

    it is late
    i'm vacuous
    it's 4 AM
    the page, still clean

    so you see...
    here i sit
    broken hearted
    tried hard to write

    but only...
    well, you know the rest

    Submitted on 2007-07-18 05:57:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you spelt divine 'devine' and yeah, i've felt like this countless times, I hate it, infact it's happening as we speak, me and my blank page. Anyway, I tried to write something like this before.. but ofcourse, nothing happened, haha, anyway. Nice write
    | Posted on 2007-07-20 00:00:00 | by Apple-Man | [ Reply to This ]

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