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    dots Submission Name: Little Joanna (Tom Fletcher)dots
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    Author: Lord Bane
    ASL Info:    24/M/Isle of Wight, UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 40/81/50
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 599
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1299



    Description:
       Yes, I know this is another thing I didn't write, but wanted to put something nice and cheery up. It's a rather sweet love song, no idea why they chose these lyrics, or if its written about a real person. Note: need to double check lyrics, so this might change


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    dotsLittle Joanna (Tom Fletcher)dots
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    Little Joanna's got big blue eyes
    Coconut cream on coffee coloured thighs
    I could die lying in her arms where castles are made of sand
    We start to dance
    But only the music is bleating when crickets replace the band

    Chorus
    She will always be my sun-kissed trampoline
    She goes up and down in my heart
    Turn into jelly beans,
    And I'm starting to believe that danger's never near
    When Joanna is here
    (Little Joanna)

    Little Joanna's like a laser-beam sky
    Gluteous maximus like a firefly
    And that's why I'm a kissaphobic, cellulite dreams are made like lemonade
    But when the shivers are salty and sea foam's the colour of space

    Chorus

    God I love Joanna, but she don't understand much
    I love it when our hands touch, knowing that I'm here
    Apple-flavoured lip gloss, she always wears a necklace
    The feeling I get reckless, when Joanna's here

    Little Joanna's got big blue eyes
    I could die lying in her arms where castles are made of sand
    We start to dance
    But only the music is bleating when crickets replace the band

    Chorus to end




    Submitted on 2007-07-18 06:32:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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