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    dots Submission Name: So Passionatedots
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    Author: BCute
    ASL Info:    23/F/MO
    Elite Ratio:    3.79 - 1295/1417/363
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 134
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    dotsSo Passionatedots
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    Skin grazes against lightly
    the most sensitive of places
    hearts thudding in sync
    rapidly and breathtaking.




    Small sighs escape
    with warm gentle laughs
    caressing around to ease
    tension otherwise there.




    Words spoken of love
    true until the end of time
    eyes connect believing
    two so utterly complete.




    Brushing again gently
    that treasured place
    he moves his hand slowly
    and picks up the pace.




    Smiling, breathless
    whole being in rapture
    never knew, holding hands
    could be so passionate.








    Submitted on 2007-07-18 11:52:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The little touches and caresses that are so innocent can sometimes hold more heat and passion than just stripping down and going at it...

    I think this is a great poem...

    With a clever little twist...you've got to love those!!!
    | Posted on 2007-09-09 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      wow.....wow
    i like :)
    i like the ambiguity....makes it more erotic.
    is this fantasy or reality?
    | Posted on 2007-07-18 00:00:00 | by treybur | [ Reply to This ]
      I really enjoyed this for where it ended up - little attention is oft given to the gentle and simple intimacies in life and touch can be sexual and intimate and passionate without getting down & dirty.

    Wonderful - makes me want to hold hands!

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

    tif
    | Posted on 2007-07-18 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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