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    dots Submission Name: Dance of lovedots
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    Author: sugar_sweet
    ASL Info:    20/ Female/ Canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 11/8/15
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 662
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 656



    Description:
       I found out 2 days ago that my fiance had been cheating on me. We talking it out, I have forgiven him, and we are still getting married. We may even have a baby in the way. This was me expressing my feelings while listening to sappy music.
    Hope you enjoy it.


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    dotsDance of lovedots
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    I love you
    you hurt me
    this is the circle we dance
    but through it all
    your love shines through
    the good and bad
    you've always been there
    you dried me tears
    and kissed my cheek
    and the world outside didnt seem so bad
    Ive given my heart to you
    and you gave yours in return
    together we stand
    united through pain
    and living for the good times
    changing the dance forever
    into a lovers embrace
    and a soft sweet kiss
    this is the dance I will remember forever
    this is our love
    it is true
    it is lasting




    Submitted on 2007-07-18 15:49:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow cant love be that beautiful for all? beautiful poem.
    | Posted on 2009-12-02 00:00:00 | by franki jorge | [ Reply to This ]


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