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    dots Submission Name: "A Thousand Different Ways"dots
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    Author: Ron Cole
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 2383/1715/240
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 909
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dots"A Thousand Different Ways"dots
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    However do I love you?
    Let me count the ways;
    I love your darling morning smile,
    that helps me start my day!

    I love the way you toss your hair
    when you're about to venture out,
    as if you know just where you're going,
    and proceed without a doubt!

    I love your long and sexy legs,
    and marvelous, slender thighs!
    I love your childish happy look
    when I bring you a surprise!

    I love the mischief in your grin
    when you're in a playful mood!
    You're so much fun to spend time with!
    Your loving is just so good!

    I love the way you care about
    even little things,
    a sparrow with a broken wing,
    or a child scuffed on her swing.

    How ever do I love you?
    To say all would take days!
    Just let me say that I love you,
    in a thousand different ways!

    Ron Cole
    July 2007




    Submitted on 2007-07-18 16:12:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      RON may I send this to my CHAR for our 42"d anniverssary, and yes I'll tell her YOU wrote it, heck I can't think of such nice words that swing together so well.

    This could be considered a master piece, to an old man like me.
    Very good my friend, thank you.
    | Posted on 2011-05-28 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]
      if someone said this to me i would just melt...
    somehow the last sentences in the 4th and 5th stanza is not as good as the rest...
    but it is still sweet and lovely anyway
    | Posted on 2007-12-27 00:00:00 | by rubymoon | [ Reply to This ]
      unlike the other piece u wrote that i commented this one made me smile and i couldnt stop smiling

    it was so sweet
    and any girl would appreciate getting a poem like that from a guy
    | Posted on 2007-08-25 00:00:00 | by truthbetold | [ Reply to This ]
      Ron, I liked everything about this poem except for the last line of the 4th stanza. For some reason that line just didn't work for me and I felt it took some of the pazazz out of the piece. It might just be me...but then that's all i can be is me.

    Keep writing brother, you have a certified gift.
    | Posted on 2007-08-15 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]
      Your poem brought a smile to my face, too! Isn't love grand?! :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-08-04 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      I really enjoyed the highlight of the little things about your love that bring you joy - your rhyme was quite tight and flowed easily.

    Good for you for recognizing!

    Happy Day!

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

    tif
    | Posted on 2007-07-19 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      aww. that's cute.
    | Posted on 2007-07-18 00:00:00 | by taramarie | [ Reply to This ]


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