this title caught my eye. the piece is very deep for being so short bot the content is not lacking at all i see the difference of hollowing in the way your lover said and the way you said this is quite clever. I applaud you
If I understand the story, the "hollowing" which is referred to is the bringing out of the inner person through intimacy. It was indeed a strange expression and presented in a quasi-third person dream angle, but the sentiment was clearly expressed.
I find this write to be very interesting
The word hollow can have so many different meanings so it is a very clever word to use in your write
I may be wrong but I took this as a write describing an intimate relationship
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