Description: Back when I idolized a certain girl, I wrote this about her. Now that I look back on it, most of this is exaggerated, but that's what happens when you're idolizing someone.
Was gonna give this to her, but never found the right moment.
Wacha think? I didn't really have any style/format in mind when I wrote it. Just started writing.
Seeds -------------------------------------------
I wish—I need—to be your smile
To be the seed
That sprouts the lily among the thorns
And grows to the rising sun
You are the one to me who means
A world of pleasure, love and hope
It is you who shined and gleamed
Across darkened valleys for us to cope
With your smile brought forgiveness
And rosy cheeks; truth
Throughout your beauty
Emanates courage, bravery and love
Between sweetest ears that forever listen to our troubles and fears
Is knowledge beyond any years and instinct to calm raging tears
Linking soft caressing hands that touch the dampest of coals
Is the necessary strength in mind body and soul
Needed to believe that an omen of Grim
Can be defeated with time understanding and a whim
Concealed by balanced, brisk and benign feet
That yield an agility and swiftness unique
Is a waning foundation impervious of support
Your heart has beat thin with lost love prolonged
You deserve what has been so long gone
So let me aid you in our times of need
And let my blood rose your cheeks
And let my love bring back your soul
So we can enlighten these Grim coals
Why is grim capitalized? do you mean Grim, as in death?
I actually didn't like the rhyming, it comes out sounding forced and you lose some sincerity. I hate saying things like that, because it is an annoying thing to be told.
I wish—I need—to be your smile
To be the seed
That sprouts the lily among the thorns
And grows to the rising sun
Like this bit a lot. go with it. Write something new with it. Otherwise , it's wasted.
Also, give the poem to the girl. So she knows. You can tell her that it isn't your current infatuation, but it might provoke a kind friendship if you let it.
Submission Name: Seeds
