tears of the seasons -------------------------------------------
Wow I have nothing to say to you
But my tears beg to differ
Now is the time to move
The years are so many
Sometimes I still think about you
When I see flattened money
If I could travel back then
To the days long ago when
We knew our future was together
It would always end up
I’ll love you forever
But now as another autumn passes by
I will be strong for you
And try not to cry
But my tears still beg to differ
Its 3 years today
You were taken away
And our souls were left to drift
I love you
I miss you
I wish I could still hold and kiss you
Feel your body near mine at night
The winter winds bring cold
But I refuse to grow old
Wanting to reverse my life
Sometimes I still see you
If only dreams really did come true
But my tears don’t agree with this lie
We used to have adventures so grand
It didn’t matter where we were
We always walked hand in hand
But that’s all over and done
We sure had some fun
Oh how I miss those times
And when spring comes at last
Wow time sure flies fast
When you have no longer have someone to share it with
So when the flowers bloom
And the birds whistle their tune
I will smile and pick a some for you
Only the jubilant daffodil will do
I will pick almost all of them
Only for my love so true
Summer is not my favorite season
And I think we all know the reason I don’t like it is
‘Cuz its your birthday
The days begin to extend
The suns rays seem to never end
I sit in our tree and wait for you to
Ask me to dance
i actually thought this one was really good! i liked the way you used the phrase "but my tears beg to differ" i think that you might have been able to go a little farther with it though. i thought the words at times may have been a little clichéd, but then again, love is not my favorite topic. it is important to you, and i thought that you made that very clear in this poem. also, i like how you used the seasons as a theme for your poem, but i don't especially like the title. anyway, i liked it. good job!