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    dots Submission Name: When All Else Failsdots

    Author: xSaraHx
    ASL Info:    17/Female/Earth
    Elite Ratio:    4.26 - 107/75/47
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Angry
    Total Views: 778
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       this is my own version or carrie underwoods song
    this happend to me long ago
    suposedly my friend stole my man from me behind my back
    I was pretty mad and this was my reaction
    and writting about sure did make things better
    even tho it was just a rumor and he was the one who started it
    That asshole wanted me and my friends to fight over him
    and sadly it worked twice

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    dotsWhen All Else Failsdots

    I can't see
    Why she's doing this
    Is it attention?
    She seems like a goody two shoes
    What can ya really do
    when your best friend steals your man?
    Somebody smart, old, and funny once told me

    When all else fails
    You gotta make her burn
    dowse her down with lovely kerosene
    and listen to her scream
    light a match and
    set that bitch on fire

    Next after you shove away
    the evidence ya gotta go to him
    There are two options to this 3rd step
    It all depends on the mood
    Somebody smart, old, and funny once told me

    When all else fails
    You gotta make him burn
    dowse him down with lovely kerosene
    and listen to him scream
    light a match and
    set that bastard on fire

    Submitted on 2007-07-18 23:02:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Now these are some good lyrics. They got angry humor that I'm feeling all too well right now. Definitely an add to my favs.
    | Posted on 2007-07-20 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]

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