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    dots Submission Name: I miss youdots
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    Author: xSaraHx
    ASL Info:    17/Female/Earth
    Elite Ratio:    4.26 - 107/75/47
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 659
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       It ryhmes too much I know I know


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    dotsI miss youdots
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    If I had to leave
    Would you stay and watch me go?
    If I kept on walking
    would you stop and stare?
    'Cuz baby I know
    I could never watch you go
    I would run after you
    pull you in my arms
    Oh baby I wish I could stay
    But you know I can't
    If you'll just cry with me
    I'm dying for you to see
    I love you so
    and I think you already know
    but I say again and again
    I'm walking away
    And as our tears fall on the dirt
    Oh God this really hurts
    You wipe the tears
    and ask me please to stay
    Its not a passing glance
    I've finaly got a chance
    But Im still gona miss you




    Submitted on 2007-07-18 23:26:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Another good lyric... you are a good writer of songs. Again, I like this muchly! bravo... bravo ... bravo ...
    | Posted on 2007-07-27 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      Very sad. I'd probably miss whoever you're missing too. Since he cried at your departure and asked you to stay out of love. Very cute.

    Anna
    | Posted on 2007-07-19 00:00:00 | by LadyDoragon | [ Reply to This ]


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