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    dots Submission Name: You Keep Callingdots
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    Author: xSaraHx
    ASL Info:    16/Female/Earth
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 107/74/47
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Angry
    Total Views: 93
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1111



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    dotsYou Keep Callingdots
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    If I don't pick up
    It doesn't mean a thing
    I know that its you calling
    I'm not stupid

    The blind will walk
    And the lame will see
    It's so clear to me
    I know what your after
    and you can't find it here
    The sounds of your laughter
    is ringin' in my ear
    Why can't you exceptthe fact
    that after all I don't want you back
    I thought I made it clear
    that all we had ended here
    But you keep calling

    Thats it now
    I just can't take it anymore
    no moe of this humiliation
    I'm slammed against the door

    The blind will walk
    And the lame will see
    It's so clear to me
    I know what your after
    and you can't find it here
    The sounds of your laughter
    is ringin' in my ear
    Why can't you exceptthe fact
    that after all I don't want you back
    I thought I made it clear
    that all we had ended here
    But you keep calling




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    ||| Comments |||
      A few changes could make these lyrics a bit better.
    "I'm not that stupid."
    "Why can't you accept the fact"
    And something doesn't sound right with this line, "that all we had ended here". Maybe if you reworded it. Keep writing.
    Katana
    | Posted on 2007-07-20 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]



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