I dont need anything at all by xSaraHx

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Submission Name: I dont need anything at all dots

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Author:	xSaraHx
ASL Info:	16/Female/Earth
Elite Ratio:	4.28 - 107/74/47
Words:	67

Class/Type:	Lyrics/Angry
Total Views:	103
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	414

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I dont need anything at all dots

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The need for attention is in high demand
People will do whatever they can
Just to get a passing glance
They spend their whole lives
Looking for a chance

I don't need you to fill me
I certainly don't need you to thrill me
I can find my own way
I don't need you to say
What I don't to hear
I really don't need you

Submitted on 2007-07-19 00:12:30 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  The need for attention is in high demand
People will do whatever they can
Just to get a passing glance
They spend their whole lives
Looking for a chance

I don't need need you to feel me
I certainly don't need you to thrill me
I can find my own way
I don't need you to say
What I don't want to hear
I really don't need you

I think this is what you ment? If not sorry. Just trying to help. Even though this was short and sweet it got the point across.
Thanks for sharing.
Kelley Frost
| Posted on 2008-02-08 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
  i like this a lot too!!! it was really good and short...and sweet...in a wierd kinda way... anyway, it was really different, i liked how you switched from talking about people in general in one verse, then switched to a specific example in the second, it's like you proved your point or something. i sung-read it to like, wierd techno. you should totally make this an automic fifties song!
| Posted on 2007-07-20 00:00:00 | by freddybuzzkill | [ Reply to This ]
  I love it, it was to the point raw and relatable. I like it the way it is but I guess you could make it longer, you could really take this somewhere. However, at the same time I think the shortness of it is what I like about it cuz its to the point. keep up the great work!!!!!!

Singlerose
| Posted on 2007-07-19 00:00:00 | by SingleRose | [ Reply to This ]

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