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    dots Submission Name: A load of BS if you ask medots
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    Author: xSaraHx
    ASL Info:    16/Female/Earth
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 107/74/47
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Misc/You left me
    Total Views: 75
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 580



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    dotsA load of BS if you ask medots
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    So when you come along
    How am I gona react to this
    crazy display of emotions
    Will I stay insight or will my heart
    take flight and go somewhere warmer
    than our death

    So my soul is in the torrents
    of the sea of tear from which we birthed
    from our bleeding hearts
    Shall I forever live in my barren world
    of eternal silence and grave regrets
    Will I forever moresuffer in yur hands
    Someone please love me and cut
    the strands that bind my heart
    to this milk carton you call life




    Submitted on 2007-07-19 00:19:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Sarah you have done it, with three little lines you've made me think. those lines being

    " Someone please love me and cut
    the strands that bind my heart
    to this milk carton you call life"

    this tells me that you want a love that is not bound by mere mortality which reminds me of a post of mine. but the thing i loved most was the comparison of life and a milk carton. very creative and it just makes me think of all the similarity's and differences of a milk carton and life. so i guess for now you are my temporary muse lol
    RATING:4
    -debbie
    | Posted on 2007-07-19 00:00:00 | by debbieXY | [ Reply to This ]



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