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    Author: xSaraHx
    ASL Info:    16/Female/Earth
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 107/74/47
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Rant/What you did
    Total Views: 88
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 427



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    That songs on again
    it reminds me of you
    I'm thrown into a pile of shards
    from broken hearts
    They reflect imaged of our past
    Yes ours
    We have history
    and you know it
    I wana throw out all I've written
    But I won't let you destroy my creativity
    My tributes to the world
    I won't let you ruin my future
    You can't mess me up




    Submitted on 2007-07-19 00:26:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ok i can kind of relate and i agree with you at the same time. first me relating every time "wish you were here" (Pink Floyd) comes on the radio i feel like breaking down and crying. i agree that you shouldn't trough out your work and creativity. there was nothing particular about this piece that stuck out at me or grabbed me and made me beg for mercy so i am just going to rate this a 3
    p.s. you look like a girl i know
    p.p.s she's the one who causes my feelings for the song
    -debbie
    | Posted on 2007-07-19 00:00:00 | by debbieXY | [ Reply to This ]



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