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  Submission Name: Sweet Talk
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| Author: | garnet4david | | ASL Info: | 20/M/Indonesia
| | Elite Ratio: | 4.18 - 81/83/58 | | Words: | 113 |
| | | Class/Type: | Poetry/Love | | Total Views: | 103 | | Average Vote: | No vote yet. | | Bytes: | 742 |
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Description:
I sometimes have problem with flow, so this is the description for each stanza.
First: When our gaze first met, it was the first time i fall in love with her. When we first kiss, i believed she was my destiny.
Second: Her inner beauty, made me believe that she was my mate. Her beautiful appearance matching my dream girl image. But later we broke off.
Third:I am sad because i can't love her more than before. But, i will never regret for meeting her, knowing her, and loving her.
Fourth:As long as there is tomorrow, i will never give up on loving her. When she decide to love me again, we will make a new beautiful story again.
She broke me off because she thought i didn't love her.
Well any comments, thought are welcomed. I also want to know whether this one is romantic or not, sweet or not. Thank You. |
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Sweet Talk
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Numerous sparkling stars inside your eyes,
make you into my whole sky.
Your lips, it matches mine.
This feeling, its crawling inside my heart.
Your cotton candy like heart,
is the best remedy for my cold.
The beautiful sunset is dancing by your side.
But still, inside you its hard to scull through.
Within my heart, this sad song remains.
An impossible desire to love you more.
There is no regret for having our picture printed.
It is a very beautiful reminiscence.
As long as the morning dew exists,
I will be waiting for your love.
When the times come to embrace us,
we'll have that sweet talk once again. |
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