Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Pain is...lifedots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: LadyMerlina
    ASL Info:    24/ F/ Montreal
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 60/93/58
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 534
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 590



    Description:
       I often wish I could write about beauty and flowers and the morning sun...

    This isn't about that.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsPain is...lifedots
    -------------------------------------------


    I speak of no hunger or yearning
    I only write it and live it and breathe it
    I keep it close, silent in my pocket
    But it yells and screams and only I can hear it.

    It returns and haunts me when I don't listen.
    My pain makes sure I don't forget it.
    But how could I when it seems like it's that all I can feel?

    I live numbly and empty until it returns
    And then I try to smother it and kill it.
    That's how I know how alive it is.

    This pain is my life and that's how I live it.




    Submitted on 2007-07-19 13:19:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      I like it, its the truth,

    I live numbly and empty until it returns
    And then I try to smother it and kill it.
    That's how I know how alive it is.

    this passage and the message it gives is fantastic. You describe yourself as empty without the pain, and how you see just how much apart of your life it is when you try to kill it.
    | Posted on 2007-07-22 00:00:00 | by Alura | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it, its the truth,

    I live numbly and empty until it returns
    And then I try to smother it and kill it.
    That's how I know how alive it is.

    this passage and the message it gives is fantastic. You describe yourself as empty without the pain, and how you see just how much apart of your life it is when you try to kill it.
    | Posted on 2007-07-22 00:00:00 | by Alura | [ Reply to This ]
      “it yells and screams and only I can hear it.”

    “It returns and haunts me when I don't listen”

    How very frightening………..
    I know the feeling.

    From Montreal? That’s a first I’ve seen on Elite Skills. I shall be returning there shortly.
    Goodness how I miss home.

    | Posted on 2007-07-20 00:00:00 | by theDevilsPocket | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this poem. It's short, but... I guess it tells your current story fairly well. I enjoyed reading it, so now I'm going to go and read a few more pieces of your writing. :-)

    Well done.
    | Posted on 2007-07-20 00:00:00 | by KasPeR88 | [ Reply to This ]
      life is pain. a lot of the time anyhow. all about finding that happy medium. then again we write from the depths of despair and it's usually the best so damn hard shti. i like this piece though, bleeding honesty is my fav. woo!
    | Posted on 2007-07-19 00:00:00 | by lark | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    146946

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Ciggarettes written by Poetic_tragedy6
    Not the Devil, but the Wind written by endlessgame23
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    A Worsening Effect written by Daniel Barlow
    FamiliarDemons ©™ written by kyserin
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    None the Wiser written by endlessgame23
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    Live In Between written by teika5
    no sky on the other side written by teika5
    A Sense Of Things written by Daniel Barlow
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    a leaf of shadow and edge written by Daniel Barlow
    Adoration written by TheStillSilence
    Twin Intercept written by Daniel Barlow
    untitled written by Outlaw
    Gaia written by endlessgame23
    A bit of Pain written by teika5
    Whispered written by endlessgame23
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Starseed written by endlessgame23
    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    Dream written by closetpoet
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    Lie back & tan written by Daniel Barlow
    Johnny's Cock written by endlessgame23

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry