I am sorry that "Apple-Man" thinks that nothing really stuck out in this piece. But, since I don't believe that was your point, I guess it doesn't really matter. You have already rubbed off some goodness onto this world. You touch the life of everyone you meet. It's easy not to see the effect, but don't mistake that for not having any effect. We are all lucky to know you!
"I am young and native"
is that supposed to be naive?
sorry to say, but nothing about this really stuck out to me, it wasn't different from other things i've seen, but not everything is perfect. Hope you aren't discouraged