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    dots Submission Name: The Hands on A Clockdots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/623/381
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Rant/Being a Teen
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    dotsThe Hands on A Clockdots
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    I want to take this life
    I live
    And shove it where the sun don't shine
    Or maybe more so my past
    I suppose this life could become something great
    If miracles really happened
    Maybe then
    Just maybe
    This life could possibly amount to something positive
    But who could tell ya?
    All the possibilities are there
    But they'll never happen for me

    Haven't I accepted this yet?
    Life is unexplainable and random
    Haven't I seen this?
    Don't I get it?
    What hell is my problem?

    Life is like the hands on a clock
    You know what’s next
    After 5
    Comes 6
    After 6
    Comes 7
    And so on...
    Although we know what comes after each number
    And we know what to expect...
    We can't be absolutely sure

    Just as the same rule applies to life.




    Submitted on 2007-07-19 16:32:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Good things happen to everybody. Life isn't all so bad. But I don't think you can shove it up your ass either, haha. Anyway, it was a good write, so carry on I'm bored once I've finished these, hehe. Shadow
    | Posted on 2007-07-24 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]
      Don't be so certain that good things won't happen to you. Don't be so sure that those so-called "miracles" are so out of your reach. Life is NOT like the hands of a clock. You DON"T know what comes next, and you have proven that yourself! If you knew what was coming, you would have nothing to write about. Bottom line is, every day is a surprise. You never know what will happen...
    | Posted on 2007-07-23 00:00:00 | by Wired | [ Reply to This ]
      I think we all feel like that sometimes, you just have to live life, accept it, and you need patience. I too have felt like this many times, I find with all the bad, something good usually overcomes it. I just hope you will have the same luck, and I enjoyed this, keep writing
    | Posted on 2007-07-19 00:00:00 | by Apple-Man | [ Reply to This ]


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