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    Author: Boom Boom
    ASL Info:    17/F/Caribbean
    Elite Ratio:    1.58 - 1/6/6
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
    Total Views: 454
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 801



    Description:
       Basically me.. Letting go of all the pain I've held inside for so long... And this is the result.


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    The children of tomorow
    Won't need today
    If they live in the sins
    Of Yesterday..
    Dawn has come
    A new day begins
    Yesterdays deceptions
    Fade in the light
    Of tomorrow’s promise
    The winds of change
    Are drawing nigh
    Why do we fear
    What we feel inside?
    Today is the end
    Of yesterday's lies
    Reaching out
    To touch the sky
    Let them go
    Let them fly..
    Beginnings anew
    Come to light
    Banishing the darkness
    To take flight
    The horrors of yesterday
    Hold me no more
    The freedom of tomorrow
    Reassures
    That I can soar and be free
    To love us
    To love me
    Embracing the world
    That embraces me...




    Submitted on 2007-07-19 18:16:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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