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    dots Submission Name: What to Writedots

    Author: Desi
    Elite Ratio:    3.88 - 210/151/34
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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       lol ok, I know this is stupid but bet you can all relate ........

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    dotsWhat to Writedots

    Thinking, thinking, what to write?

    How I hate these endless nights, when nothing said comes out just right...

    Would like to submit something new for all to view, but must admit, can't come up with nothing new...

    So, here you are, this is it. Yes, could cry and throw a fit!

    Bet you all have been here too, when what to write, just won't come to you...

    Submitted on 2004-06-18 17:21:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Writer Block sucks! When that happen think about a coke sitting on a table LOL Or you can think about a object that never moves like a rock. Think about what it could say if it can talk.
    | Posted on 2005-11-02 00:00:00 | by kaoriliveshere | [ Reply to This ]
      right there with you sometimes it take days to come up with something new and original this was good and i enjoyed that it had a little bit of rhyming lia
    | Posted on 2004-06-18 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah yes.. I also have those problems sometimes. I find myself gazing at random objects and thinking about how I could write about them.. stuff like that. Anyways cute poem.
    | Posted on 2004-06-18 00:00:00 | by melancholystar | [ Reply to This ]
      So you had nothing to write... but you wrote about that... which means you had something to write about... though it was about not having something to write about...*dizzy*
    I know, at least, that I enjoyed reading it
    | Posted on 2004-06-18 00:00:00 | by Eggman | [ Reply to This ]

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