How it is and what it feels like by KasPeR88

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Submission Name: How it is and what it feels like dots

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Author:	KasPeR88
Elite Ratio:	3.05 - 30/51/31
Words:	32

Class/Type:	Poetry/Broken
Total Views:	173
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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It was written quite a while ago. It's not a masterpiece, but it's worth the submission.

How it is and what it feels like dots

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Infected
Buried alive
Light fire
Burned alive
Within
Putrid skin
Dire evil
Seams of sin
Disgust
This mind decays
This future
Falls astray
Alone
This is today
One last sense
Drift away

Submitted on 2007-07-20 10:50:53 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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wow, what a positive message. i don't think i've been this uplifted in a while. makes wanna get up and give random people hugs. how about it? wanna hug?
| Posted on 2007-07-20 00:00:00 | by Solomon Disease | [ Reply to This ]

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