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    dots Submission Name: Brandeddots
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    Author: XmaryjaneX
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 142/38/9
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Lyrics/
    Total Views: 686
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       take a walk inside my eyes
    take a walk inside my pain
    be me for a day


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    dotsBrandeddots
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    Accusations
    OF NO LOVE
    LOVE
    OF NO OTHER
    but You
    YOUR FACE
    imprinted in the back of mY eYes
    YOUR SKIN
    SCREAMING INFIDELITIES
    you swim in mY veins now and alwaYs

    IT'S NOT OVER
    IT'S NOT OVER
    NOT TODAY
    NOT TOMORROW
    REACHING OUT
    PLAYING SORROW
    IT'S NOT OVER


    give it time
    blood spraYed over the books
    seering mY soul
    with your look
    so deep your razorblade
    tryed to drain You out
    I TRYED TO LET YOU GO

    but..

    IT'S NOT OVER
    IT'S NOT OVER
    NOT TODAY
    NOT TOMORROW
    REACHING OUT
    PLAYING SORROW
    IT'S NOT OVER

    ...
    the greatest thing you'll ever learn...
    is just to love and...
    ...

    HOOOOOOOLLLLD OOOOONNN
    ...
    IT'S NOT OVER
    IT'S NOT OVER
    NOT TODAY
    AND
    NOT TOMORROW
    REACHING OUT
    PLAYING YOUR SORROW

    if i had to cut you out there'd be nothing left
    im branded
    with your love

    IT'S NOT OoooVEERRrrr....




    Submitted on 2007-07-20 11:45:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is hands down without a doubt a total favorite! these lyrics would really make a damn good song! perfect flow you can definitly put this to some music and sing your heart out!
    also i can completely relate to this because i myself am going thriough this so i think that may draw me to this even more. well regaurdless this is a terrific piece!
    | Posted on 2007-07-28 00:00:00 | by EL | [ Reply to This ]
      damn girl, you really know how to put it out there. [censored] you got more comment on your [censored] than i do. your really talented and all the mushy gushy [censored]. but damn........... wow
    | Posted on 2007-07-22 00:00:00 | by DrkRomeo_sGirl | [ Reply to This ]


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