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3 in a back seat


Author: xaingua
ASL Info:    16/Female/A quiet place
Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 11 /9 /11
Words: 208
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Description:

Ever wonder what would happen if you got stuck in the back seat of a small car, on the way home from a party, at night, with your crush, and his Identical twin brother?


3 in a back seat


Your brother is the funny one
So I couldn't help but laugh
When he starting singing horribly
About some lovestruck sap

I know you hate his carefree ways
They counteract your own
You turned to him in frustration
when he hit an aweful tone.

You looked at him with stubborn eyes
The kind I live to see
He looked at you through innocence
And pointed around you and over to me

"Well at least she laughed." The younger said
And you spun a gaze towards me
Your eyes searched for my smile in the dark
I pretended not to see.

Cramped within your sister's car.
Your brother, you, and me
I hope my giggle filled your heart
with thoughts of what could be

You are stern and sometimes hard
But I know your soft inside
That night the loveing gaze you gave
Prevoked my love not to hide

Your chocolate hair looked softer somehow
your eyes seemed more aware
Perhaps that long moment you soaked me in
Was your way of saying you cared

All the way you bickered like little boys
but you leg rested agiainst mine
Where you masking thoughts of us?
Was I still on our mind?




Submitted on 2007-07-20 13:52:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  good job. but its hard to get an idea of what is really going on at all. its slightly confusing to me. I think if it was a little longer and went thru a few more things a little more description that would help. its a good start I just think it mite need a little work. good luck and keep up the good work.
| Posted on 2007-07-20 00:00:00 | by Sereto_Uesugi | [ Reply to This ]


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