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    dots Submission Name: Mark My Wordsdots
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    Author: 777sacrites777
    ASL Info:    19/f/ TX baby!
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 302/166/70
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 272
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    Bytes: 815



    Description:
       finding out he'd cheated on me


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    dotsMark My Wordsdots
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    I used to be oblivious to what
    goes on behind closed doors,
    but this curiosity that's come over me
    just begs to know more.

    Now heeding to his every move,
    watching while I wait.
    I'm learning about his double life
    as my wonder turns to hate.

    Cause as I observe them,
    his true colors bleed through.
    And I'm left in the shadows
    knowing there's nothing I can do.

    I would say mark my words,
    but my silence says it all.
    You'll get yours too one day, you'll see.
    And I'll get to watch YOU fall.

    This bitter sweet revenge I hold
    will never conceal this pain;
    but it sure as hell will suffice for now
    as I do it all in vain.




    Submitted on 2007-07-20 14:12:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That is a nice piece of poetry
    I like it.
    You go girl!

    Bobby K
    (The Poor Mans' Poet)
    | Posted on 2009-07-11 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]


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