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    dots Submission Name: The Razor's Edgedots
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    Author: the heartless
    ASL Info:    15/male/LA
    Elite Ratio:    3.46 - 24/68/43
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
    Total Views: 147
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsThe Razor's Edgedots
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    When life has you down
    When there is no reason to let go of a frown
    When pain stabs in your heart
    When you feel like death is the only way to restart

    The Razor's Edge is your salvation

    As you stand between hope and hurt
    As you wonder what life means and what its worth
    As you start to beleive there is no reason
    As you choose to die before the next season

    The Razor's Edge is your salvation

    Then you run your way to death on your wrist
    Then you add one more sin to your list
    Then you see the mistake you made
    Then you cry and cry as your life begins to fade
    Then you ask God, "I'm sorry, please don't let this be the end."
    Then God lays his hand on you and your wound begins to mend.

    The Razor's Edge is not your salvation




    Submitted on 2007-07-20 15:00:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You know what this poem just pulled me in from start to finish. I sometimes think that the razor blade is my salvation and I almost died from it once. But I still haven't discovered that the razor isn't my salvation. When did you discover that and how did you discover that?
    | Posted on 2008-08-11 00:00:00 | by Rachel Ruff | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow! You wrote this? It's so good Ry.I love it.Just no dying on me please.
    | Posted on 2007-07-20 00:00:00 | by Fallyn Angel | [ Reply to This ]



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