Description: Not Finished
I Know I Can Improve It
I Just need To Find The Right Words
This Isnt A Woe Is Me Poem This Is To Remind Me Of All The Good Times I Shared With Him
End Of My Fairy Tale -------------------------------------------
walking along the beach
with our toes is the sand
it was all so beautiful
you were my perfect man
laying beside you
staring into your eyes
believing every word you said
you never told me a lie
falling asleep in you warm arms
i knew i was safe
that i wouldnt come to harm
believeing in you
giving you my trust
i gave you everything
even my heart
watching you cry
something i didnt like
kissing away your tears
giving you back your life
reading your poems
with tears in my eyes
the truth you told
about wanting to die
watching a movie
in the dead of night
cuddling in
and you holding me tight
laying on your chest
not making a sound
listening to your heart beat
not wanting it to end
your gentle kiss i miss the most
made me smile
made my heart melt
your the only guy ive ever met
that can make my heart beat
fast and slow
no matter where you were in the world
i never felt alone
i really liked this piece as well , it has alot alot of emotion in it. but heres a little problem though ( and i make it constantly) it you ryhme it some stanzas and not at all in others, it throws of the flow juss a litttle bit. but flow doesnt matter to me really, its what you get out of the words. and i felt it alot. great piece.
Submission Name: End Of My Fairy Tale
