Maroon Love by angelfyre

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Submission Name: Maroon Love dots

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Author:	angelfyre
ASL Info:	17/yes please/here
Elite Ratio:	4.07 - 254/238/76
Words:	204

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	95
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	1394

Description:
maroon like abandon, not maroon like the colour.lol

Maroon Love dots

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You got me, Mr. Beatle,
With your mild secrets.
With your happy hands
Making everything so delicate.
Making everything dark enough

You got me, Mr. Beatle,
With your willingness to agree.
With your polite eyes
That will never forget to say please.
That will never maroon me

And we are in this maroon love
Maroon love with perverted periods
Intricate drums never marooning love
But this love tries to maroon us.

I got you, Mr. Beatle,
With my yellow piece of grass...
With my dotted pickup line
Making you stretch between the bars.
Making the strings quiver like stars

I got you, Mr. Beatle,
Without painting the road.
Without ever being told
That you were the sun that knights the trees.
That maroon love will break my knees.

And we are in this maroon love
Maroon love with perverted periods
Intricate drums never marooning love
But this love tries to maroon us.
And we are
We are
We are
We are
In this maroon love
That we cant maroon.
And we are in this maroon love
Maroon love with perverted periods
Intricate drums never marooning love
But this love,
This love it tries to maroon us.

Submitted on 2007-07-21 13:12:29 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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You got me, Mr. Beatle,
With your mild secrets.
With your happy hands
Making everything so delicate.
Making everything dark enough

(*john lennon voice* did I get you with my mild secrets, do I have mild secrets, are they like mild soap, or mild flavored hot sauce? my happy anxious hands are always ready, and nothing is done right unless it is handled delicately, you and darkness, I know..lol..turing off lights)

You got me, Mr. Beatle,
With your willingness to agree.
With your polite eyes
That will never forget to say please.
That will never maroon me

(please and and and thank you..gotta have both of those, cause everything is earned and much beloved, always grateful for everything)

And we are in this maroon love
Maroon love with perverted periods
Intricate drums never marooning love
But this love tries to maroon us.

(being perverted together, can be cool..lol.
this love like everything has faults cause humans have faults, but true love overcomes)

I got you, Mr. Beatle,
With my yellow piece of grass...
With my dotted pickup line
Making you stretch between the bars.
Making the strings quiver like stars

(now this is quite sexual..lol, the word stretch is period..sorry just is...you will have to explain what you meant by this stanza a bit more)

I got you, Mr. Beatle,
Without painting the road.
Without ever being told
That you were the sun that knights the trees.
That maroon love will break my knees.

("sun that knights the trees." loved that line.
to end such a perfect thing will kill you indefinately, just a sign that you are commited past definition.)

And we are in this maroon love
Maroon love with perverted periods
Intricate drums never marooning love
But this love tries to maroon us.
And we are
We are
We are
We are
In this maroon love
That we cant maroon.
And we are in this maroon love
Maroon love with perverted periods
Intricate drums never marooning love
But this love,
This love it tries to maroon us.

(you speak of an abandonment of this sort of perfect love, now I understand)
| Posted on 2007-07-21 00:00:00 | by Reckoner | [ Reply to This ]

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