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Author:	angelfyre
ASL Info:	17/yes please/here
Elite Ratio:	4.07 - 254/238/76
Words:	195

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	126
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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Description:
no, it's not sexual, so if that's what you are looking for, look elsewhere.lol

Pornography dots

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Webs of fingers taken down
Dragging shells all across town
They share moist kisses with
They take the most but not with
Love, Love, Love.

They are porn,
in a dirty bed.
They are the a stain
in the sheets.
Taken from the poor.
Taken from the poor.
And what they have to say about me…
Is that I’m the one watching.

But I have love,
In a kalidescope scrap book.
I have love love love
In my safest place.
Only for the rich spirits
Only for the ruch.
And what I have to say about them…
Is that they are unlucky.

I have a single cloud,
And a single tree.
A single sun
And it’s all I need.
I have love not porn
And I’ll never be poor.
Never be poor.

They are porn,
in a dirty bed.
They are the a stain
in the sheets.
Taken from the poor.
Taken from the poor.
And what they have to say about me…
Is that I’m the one watching.

I have a single cloud,
And a single tree.
A single sun
And that’s all I need.

Submitted on 2007-07-21 13:16:43 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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This was written very well. At first I did think that it was going to be a 'naughty' poem. I can relate to this because its what I have to. Keep up the nice work, and I'll keep reading

Saint Razor
| Posted on 2007-07-21 00:00:00 | by brknprclndol | [ Reply to This ]
So you say its not sexual, why would I ever have an incling of a feeling that it pertained to the sexual relm of thinking now? how just how?..lol

ok let me analyze this slowly ....dot dot dot

Webs of fingers taken down
Dragging shells all across town
They share moist kisses with
They take the most but not with
Love, Love, Love.

(well shells kicked into your mind from being so close to water recently, I bet and a certain shell memory..hmmm...hands are prevented from touching those places they wish to touch, and thus they are brought out into the open, and thus down onto the ground in front, dragging these oceanic objects, moist and giving out love to most, although the love is manufactured and not purely desired)

They are porn,
in a dirty bed.
They are the a stain
in the sheets.
Taken from the poor.
Taken from the poor.
And what they have to say about me…
Is that I’m the one watching.

(analyzing the screen as it analyzes you..very strange indeed. I am bewildered and a bit tired trying to interpret the 'poor' angle here...something is being referred to as the 'porn', and this entity is harming another in the process of being watched)

But I have love,
In a kaleidescope scrap book.
I have love love love
In my safest place.
Only for the rich spirits
Only for the ruch.
And what I have to say about them…
Is that they are unlucky.

(kaleidescope changes images, lets the pass through one another to form new molds of rich colour, and thus love changes, not in its views of one another, but in its types of affection, and the situations surrounding the time. You call these spirits unlucky, explain)

I have a single cloud,
And a single tree.
A single sun
And it’s all I need.
I have love not porn
And I’ll never be poor.
Never be poor.

(ok, you describe the love that envelopes you, you describe it as something above everything, you have all you will ever need and it is not a show to put on for others, it is beyond beautiful, and it is rich in values, never poor in beliefs.)

I find this poem to speak very well about the travesty that overcomes most people, when pertaining to love and why we love, for what reasons. So many waste their affections and time on what they have so little understanding of. I loved this poem, you gotta keep writing, never let up, I have to do the same too.
| Posted on 2007-07-21 00:00:00 | by Reckoner | [ Reply to This ]

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