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    dots Submission Name: My nightmaredots
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    Author: BloodtornAngel
    ASL Info:    21/F/inyour wildest dream
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 21/28/43
    Words: 262
    Class/Type: Poetry/Betrayal
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    dotsMy nightmaredots
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    It's so easy to console me,
    when you don't understand.
    Do you know my whole past,
    and the reason i fear?
    Do you know why i wouldn't hurt you,
    and don't want to make you mad?
    Do you know why I ran when Satan called my house,
    or why i envy that you held the knife to him?
    Do you know why i flinch when i hear his name?
    If you didn't than I'll tell you so i won't go insane.
    Then if you still understand me, console away.
    Twice in a year I was pushed past my will,
    and though i deny it, the want was there, hidden behind fear.
    Fifteen ex-boyfriends did you never wonder why?
    I was emotional, crazy, and violent at times,
    in the end they'd get mad, turn their anger to mem, so I ran.
    Yes Hewitt hurt me, but it wasn't just that,
    its the thoughts behind the fear that make it so bad.
    I should have killed him, hurt him, stopped his heart, and made him dead,
    but instead i was pushed, and my will snapped in the end.
    As for his name,
    too many memories still try to flood that gate,
    and it still hurts to realize,
    I was jut a pawn in his game.
    Then I think of the things,
    I wrote, said, and thought about you,
    and i know that i loved you,
    and though i should not i still do.
    Because you used me,
    a pawn in your game,
    but I welcome hearing your name,
    Because
    it causes me pain.




    Submitted on 2007-07-21 15:48:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow! I don't know why, but thats is very true, sometime it's the pain in it self that keeps us alive. it was good.


    Faid
    | Posted on 2008-10-05 00:00:00 | by faideddarkness | [ Reply to This ]


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