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    dots Submission Name: Panicdots
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    Author: BloodtornAngel
    ASL Info:    21/F/inyour wildest dream
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 21/28/43
    Words: 168
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsPanicdots
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    What are you afraid of?
    The Boogiemans not real,
    he's only a scare for children,
    who refuse to finish their meal.
    Vampires and Demons,
    its all in your head,
    don't watch so much horror,
    they aren't in your closet or under the bed.
    So what are you so scared of?
    If it's blood you'll not stay long in this place,
    so many fights and so much confusion,
    theres always blood on someones face.
    We're in high school, we're not children
    and we'll do as we see fit,
    and for you to act this fearful,
    shows your not ready for the big kids yet.
    When your losing your head and thinking not,
    just toughen up or we'll end you home,
    and heres to you, it's not all smiles and fun.
    Cuz we're sixteen almost grown,
    we know right from wrong.
    So whatever your afraid of,
    Leave it at the door,
    you can't just run away.
    If you don't confront your problems,
    how will you ever help us with ours.




    Submitted on 2007-07-21 15:56:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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