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    dots Submission Name: I love you and forever is nowdots
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    Author: PrettyHeart
    ASL Info:    39
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/55/53
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       This is about my grandpa and me not wanting to face the fact he is dying from cancer! I love him he has always been my rock, no one could ask for a better love then what my grandpa gave me. I love you PA PA!


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    I love you and forever is now

    I sit here in my room, crying.
    Knowing that you are there waiting, dying.
    Waiting for my voice to come through
    I know no comforting words for you.
    I contemplate the things I should say.
    I love you, I will miss you, please stay.
    Those words they do not ease.
    Your time is precious even to me.
    And I only waste it away.
    As I look for the words to say.

    I think of memories from the past.
    The clock reads another hour has passed.
    My tears begin to fall even more.
    And my thoughts wage a war
    I need to let you know just how I feel.
    Even so, your life time begins to steal.
    Why canít I bring myself to talk to you?
    I just need to say I love you!
    But I have so much more to say.
    And so I wait another day.

    Guilt sets in to my heart
    And it begins to tear it apart.
    I understand now what itís about.
    I am scared to let my feelings out.
    I love you, this we both know.
    Nevertheless, I am scared to let you go.
    I know your time is over.
    And that God has no more favors.
    So I must say it to you now.
    I love you and forever is now!




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      Loss is difficult even for the strongest among us. I lost my last grandma when I was thirty-one, but she's never left my heart. Your words touched me deeply and personally. Yes, this one is sad, but also a love poem of high caliber. Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-08-21 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      Im Sorry You Had To Feel like This To Write Such A Beautiful and heart Felt Peice Of Poetry
    I Really Enjoyed Reading It

    Love Stacey
    | Posted on 2007-07-24 00:00:00 | by AngelinDisguise | [ Reply to This ]
      this is such a sad poem about your grandfather and you can tell you love him very much i am so sorry your family is going through this loss. Joanna
    | Posted on 2007-07-23 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]
      poetry is such a great release for all those things that tied up our tongues and left us silent
    | Posted on 2007-07-23 00:00:00 | by ladydeepshade | [ Reply to This ]


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