Out of reach -------------------------------------------
Out of reach
If love is good and love is pure
Why must there be pain endured?
If love is happy and love is kind
Why must love mess with your mind?
If love is peace and everlasting
Why are loved ones always passing?
If love is honest and never ends
Why are we hurt most by our friends?
If love is all that we should need
Why does my path never lead
To a place where love is there?
Is it not something I get to share?
Why when I am happy
Am I brought down?
Just when my path
Seems to turn around?
Sometime I feel loves out of reach
Even when people preach
That love will find me in the end
I don’t believe the message they send
Good but the ending could use a little tweaking, you started off really good in the begining but towards the end you lost the flow that was making it work. "Why does my path never lead" it where I feel you lost the flow. But all in all this is good write. And it is honest amd truthful. Good Work!
Omg Sooo True
Love Is Supposed To Be The One Thing In Life That Will Set you Free but Instead It Seems To break And Destroy Us N Matter How Old We Are...
Great Poem I Really Enjoyed It
Love Stacey
Submission Name: Out of reach
