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    dots Submission Name: Secret desiresdots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1099
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    Bytes: 528



    Description:
       I wrote this back when I was stuck witha hopeless crush.


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    dotsSecret desiresdots
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    There is something I must tell you.
    I promise I won’t lie.

    I want to hold you close.
    To never make you cry.

    I wish peer into your eyes.
    To see your mortal soul.

    I try and try to help you.
    To show you that I care.

    That other girl you say you love.
    She is never really there.

    I would never hurt you.
    You’d never shed a tear.

    I want you to be happy.
    I promise I would always be there.




    Submitted on 2007-07-23 18:09:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Being stuck in that hopeless situation isn't is it? It hurts, it's hopeless. You feel like Trey Songz, I know i did, "can't help but wait".
    | Posted on 2007-12-14 00:00:00 | by AeThe Lost Poet | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this most everyone can relate to having that crush who is already with someone
    | Posted on 2007-09-06 00:00:00 | by Lost-Poet | [ Reply to This ]
      yeh good i like it reminds me of people who have loved but have nothing to show for their pain
    | Posted on 2007-07-27 00:00:00 | by kingsley | [ Reply to This ]
      Ahhh i loved having crushes back in the day!!
    Nice poem, it just reminds me of high school days!!
    LoZzA..
    | Posted on 2007-07-25 00:00:00 | by justdontknow | [ Reply to This ]


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